Critique:

In this piece that Rauschenberg made, the woman in the corner inspired me and i made my collage and woman theme based on that. Although that was the only thing that my collage and his have in common, i like the way that i made mine because it has a very feminine, and it reminds me of the Flapper Era, and the Roaring Twenties, which was one of the times in American history which was a prosperous time. I also like the background color, because that also reminds me of Rauschenberg and how he painted on his collages. i really like the way that i made it and honestly, I would not changed anything on my collage.

some of the things that i would do differently would probably be the background and possibly the coloring. i like the lettering so i wouldnt change that, but maybe more color and i would add graffiti and more pictures. my profession was a clothing designer of my own clothing line.